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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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if we part would you miss the warmth of my arms inviting you and holding you so close that our heartbeats echo each others rhythm if we part would you miss the touch of unspoken words shared when lips press together exchanging love thoughts if we part would you miss the touch of my eyes as they take in every inch of you leaving a trail of eye kisses behind if we part would you miss the soft sounds that escape from my lips as my breathing intensifies from just the touch of you if we part would you miss the hours, the minutes and even the seconds we share exposing that part of each that has been hidden from view if we part would you miss my silken skin, the hidden pale that always desires the feel of your touch if we part would you miss the soft look in my eyes when desires have been met and adoration shines as we look into each other's souls if we part would you miss the special smile and the ~~soft kisses that I save for you when we must part from each other for the day would you... miss me M [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-04-2000).] |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
so sweet...and romantic...very beautifully written...great job! much love~ MiSeRyDivine~~ All i want in life is to be happy It seems to me How messed up things can be Everytime i get ahead I fell more dead ~KoRn~~ |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
MiseryDivine thank you so much for you sweet comments ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Oh, This is brilliant. Love the question at the end Its what we all think about Penned greatly. Beth~ |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Beth thank you for your wonderful comments I am sorry I missed this... I guess it went to the bottom and my hotmail notifications lock up on me every day... {{hugs}} Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow, this was just down right great. Loved it. Juls |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Juls...perked my spirits right up after I read this ~~soft smile Maureen |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
yes, a wonderful emotional poem this one... Maureen... well done.. regards, sudhir |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Maureen, if he doesn't he is a Damn Fool! Beautiful poem, full of love and insecurity at once. Take care. Catalinamoon |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sudhir ...sighing... you always bless me with kindness ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
We were never one-- yet I miss it all! And should you not write here again......... I would miss you |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
from one moon to another....keep shining ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
JAMIE.....I can't even get into my hotmail to know who is responding..but I am beginning to think that all have your name ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Moon- *sigh* That poem was so beautiful! *jumps up and down happily* It was so very very very PRETTY!!  -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Wren should be fluttering her wings not jumping ...*s thank you very much for such nice words ~~softly smiling Maureen |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
oooh...! I loved it..! especially the lines: 'leaving a trail of eye kisses behind' loved that very thought of eye kisses!! ~Artistic~ |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Artistic..there are thought kisses, eye kisses, whisper kisses, word kisses, mind kisses all internet type kisses..hmmmm and can almost feel as good as the real ~~soft smiles here's a fun one for you...(can't remember if I posted it yet) Kisses In Your Mind It's early morn, the phone it rings Awakens me, gives start Was dreaming, I, a pleasant one No shadows in the dark. Had arms around me, warm and strong With breath an inch away When exhaled, tickled me a bit Preferred awhile to stay. It rang again, I let it go Too early still, was time Instead I rested, filled with thoughts Had kisses in my mind. Remembered when you planted them Not kisses, but the thoughts How often times you teased me so Eyes roaming body, soft. Until you saw me, on the edge Then lips to skin, would find You planted all the kiss of want As kiss thoughts in my mind. Whenever you're away from me And dreams take me on high The thoughts of lips on lips, of mine Replays in my mind's eye. Hoping that the same is true When times are tough or sad That kisses float from me to you When I am feeling "bad". (naughty) So when your eyes upon this read No matter who, you'll find Someone out there loving you Sends kisses in your mind. 2*15*2000 |
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Kirsty24 Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 40Australia |
We all wonder if they would miss if we part, you have just put it into the best words that I have ever seen. Congrats.. - Kirsty   |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
WOW!!!! i love this poem MMoonchild. this put me in tears. sounds like what i used to say to myself everynight when i was away from my girl. but she found another. so i guess she didnt miss me. =( please e-mail me hun *hugs* would love to chat with you. love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kirsty24 thank you very much..yes.. missing someone sure makes it wonderful when your eyes meet each other's upon returning ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen I don't know if he would miss you perhaps not if he's blind and stupid, but I know I would miss your soft smiles and delicious poetry if you stopped writing. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Jesse,thanks..I think I emailed you but the past few days have been very tiring for me I will check and see ... thank you ~~smiles Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-12-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kethry YOU "SMILE" ME ALL THE TIME...THANK YOU sorry I hit the caps... Maureen |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
absolutely loved this poem very romantic so much feeling to it. Great work! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Moonchild you have described all those things to be missed so perfectly that I am already missing them...James |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Rosebud1229 thank you for your nice words of support James thank you for understanding the missing..sometimes you can miss when you haven't even parted yet ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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