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Draining |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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You came over towards me, Calling my name, What now? I wonder? Have you not yet sucked out the last ounce of my soul? A challenge for me is no longer such, You drain me, you hurt. I just want to be freed from the chains I'm in. You say you're gone, but oh wait, not really. I have this aching, make it go away. I have this need, make it fade. I want to be without, but it's lonely here. Take yourself away from me...remove your vampire grip. Not written about anyone in particular, kind of life in general, but I can think of a few who might take it personally.  Tell me what you think! |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Very good! The contrasts are well done. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Well done. I particularly liked remove your vampire grip. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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