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Perfectly Twisted |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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What will you find inside a perfectly twisted mind, those that dance with feathered masks, numbing powder in glass flasks, lands of violent velvet and spinning violet, forked tongues spewing freaks, a soul of ashes with dust that speaks, flowing liquid road, tales the devil,himself,told, the darkest thoughts tied in golden spun knots, goblets of elegant drink in shades of perfect pink, with "Death" making a charming toast to ballrooms filled with elusive ghosts? Whisper quietly to me of what you find within the depths of my perfectly twisted mind. "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
(after I re-read this I decided it needed some fixing....so, here is what I came up with) What will you find inside my perfectly twisted mind? Those that dance with feathered masks, numbing powder in glass flasks spilt upon lands of violent velvet and spinning violet. Forked tongues spewing freaks, with souls of ashes and dust that speaks. Flowing liquid road paved with tales the devil,himself,told. The darkest thoughts of insanity tied in golden knots. Goblets of elegant drink in shades of perfect pink with "Death" making a charming toast to ballrooms filled with elusive ghosts? Whisper quietly to me. Can you see The perfect imagery? "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
I can see it! Really, really cool!!! You got it going on ! And thanks for your comment  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Ali.... I can really get into this one. I have found that there is no light without the darkness..... there has to be that balance. Either your mind is not that twisted, or we are of like thoughts!! Enjoyed the words......... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Cool. Sometimes I feel that my mind is messed up like that. Keep writing! Jenn |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
I REALLY REALLY liked this piece. I guess we've all got perfectly twisted minds...  . Regardless... this was a great poem!! Keep up the great work!!Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Wonderful! This is beautifully twisted indeed... lol As am I some/most of the time, in my own ways  Cool versing and great imagery. I'll have to do something violently twisted in here so you arent all alone on this lolStrive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Sunny, am glad you liked it. At times I think that I have no light...but deal with the dark and enjoy every minute of it...YES, TWISTED!! : }~ Jenn, I think maybe at times we all are. Thank you , am glad you enjoyed! Lil One, yes all of us...just some a bit more than others...lol. Thunderkyss...bring your twistedness, please??!! I am begining to think I am the MOST TWISTED OF ALL... : }~ Once again...thank you all for your kind responses... Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
perfectly twisted yes indeed there's only one question? can I join this party such elegance and pose even from the ghost .. she's has on such a beautiful formal. may I HAVE tHIS DANCE? sire I dance in recorse with this corpse that bones keeps crushing at my knees blood oozing down my spine as your knuckles twist my flesh into a knot.. Kinda gory oh well thanks for the dance. |
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