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Shadowed Pathway |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Walk with me, There’s a long shadowed pathway; Care to see? Forest edge of the old wood, Seldom there, And from there, I’ve heard no good. There’s a long shadowed pathway, Always dark, Creeping dark, in brightest day. Following in the grayness, Eyeless sight, Sounds not sight, all is sameness. Do you hear the whisper sounds, Feel the air that’s closing in, And moisture rises from ground; Wearing insect bitten skin. An old wood, Dankness of many ages, Puddle trail, Touch and smell, Fullness that causes rages, Dismal wood. What’s beyond? What does the path lead you to, Why the care, Why go there, You really don’t know do you? What’s beyond? Shadow path, Entering in epitaph. Gloom 2000 |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
that's the problem..where does the path lead....towards or away from nice form as always, PG |
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boji stone Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 62USA |
i like your style, it's eerie, i love the land of shadows, how else can we appreciate the light! bjstone |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Gloom overshadowed by darkness with a creeping sense of horror. It gave me the chills, cause I know where that path leads. Good poem nice metre. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
Creepy but beautiful. I can feel the moistness of the pathway and its shadows travelling through the skin and departing through a tear. Wonderful. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, MMoonchild, Sometimes just there travel down the path is all we know, Where we came from, how we got here, where we go, All is lost in the putting one foot in front of the other, Thank you for taking the time to respond. Thank you, boji stone My land is of shadows, it’s the windows, How I look out into the world around, Glad you can enjoy my words, some what dark, Thank you, Kethry Darkness isn’t always horror, some of the worst Is done in the brightness of day. I am pleased you walked a bit of my pathway with your reading. Thank you, ilph For your kind response, glad you enjoyed The walk with my words. Gloom |
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