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Eyes That See Through You
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Eyes That See Through You |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Eyes That See Through You I looked in on you, you peered back at me there lies the difference. I see with eyes of depth, into the soul I try to gaze for value I am seeking. Your sight is one sided shallow is your perception you need not even speak your eyes say enough. I try to sustain my footing in this shared space but find the air sickening and stagnate. What passes your tong does not have any pleasing attributes, no wonder you stand alone and shameless. The prevalent nature I posses affords clearer insight, I will always keep seeking the truths that bind me. Win you do not! for no power do you posses, lack of foresight is what you have maintained not wisdom. Time I bid to be on my side for strength I gain in this one sided affair called unity. Wisdom fought for is untouchable, and puffed up is your pride which in the end you will loose, but freedom I posses. By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this, very strong words, to someone who has hurt you. Powerful, emotional poem. catalinamoon |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
I like this! Very defiant sounding and passionate indeed. Gave me a rush reading it, thanks : ) Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I just may put this on my refrigerator...(he wouldn't understand the implications of that anyway...) but this is fab, and I thank you for writing out my creed...smiles and hugs to my most serene sister... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, Thank you so much for the kind replys, you know some times its so hard to hold everything together, to be the one smiling, to be nice and the do all person, some times I just want to screem, tell people how much they walk all over me, and to the ones that are supose to be the closest are the ones that hurt you the worst, this poem is supose to help me stay strong but some times I find that its very hard to stay firmly grounded. Serenity some times I want to tape my poetry to their forehead and say here read understand don't talk to me until you do, but they don't get it do they (shaking head) thanks again, I needed to come here sometimes I feel like I don't belong in open because of how I feel. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
i know exactly how you feel, Cerenity.. that is why i write because if i keep all it inside, i might go crazy someday.. and i don't ever want see that day.. anyway, great piece. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cerenity, I loved this poem so strong and certain. I particularly like win you do not. I'd have written it in capitals and had it tatooed to his forehead. *smiles* Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Like many who have responded, cerentiy, I, too, know how you feel. I'm not going to put words in your mouth and say who you were writhing this to, but if I'd have written it, it would be dedicated to my father. Anyway... it was a great read. I loved it! Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, Thank you again for your words of kindness, you know I always wake up and tell myself OK this is a new day and I am going to make the best of it and most of the time it works but today the bad half of me says NO I am not going to let you (the other half of my life) destroy this day. Now we will see if I do what I say, man I wish I had some of you others strength right now some of the poems I read hear are filled with such strength and I feel so helpless for the life of me I can not get that needed power to stand on my own two feet agains those I need to, anyway thank you so much and here goes another day in the pit of HELL. Love, to all of you at lest I can give someone in my life true love and they will not squander it, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Cerenity, powerfully written poem. really enjoyed reading this. Wisdom fought for is untouchable, and puffed up is your pride which in the end you will loose, but freedom I posses. "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Brian, thank you for your words of kingness, now if you find my power floating around and maybe some stray courage please send it my way, and I miss placed all that wisdom too, yikes I am a MESS. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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