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Red Lines |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Red Lines She looks at herself in the mirror Running down her face, a single tear She looks at what she holds in her hands She knows that no one understands The fear is there So is a pain that she cannot bear The urge again rushes through her Why she does this she isn’t sure She doesn’t want to do this She puts it down and starts to sit She can no longer restrain She picks it up again She closes her eyes The will inside her dies She finally made her decision She makes the first incision She loses track of time Stares at the thin red line More and more appear Her mind starts to get clear Then finally she’s done But she’s really just begun |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
o my god....this is just great...it's almost like I'm the person standing there...I can identify myself so much with it... check your mail, ok? love, Virgin Suïcide... And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back.......... |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
well done with the flow of the words my dear .... it does have a certain feeling that makes you wonder  |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Like watching an old movie of myself a few years ago....you definetly know just how to hit home... Well written and the imagery in unblievable.\ Until... "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
danni...we could have a party and compare scars...my are long and jagged and yours are small and many...i think i have ocd...i always cut in fives i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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