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...her name is Descention
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...her name is Descention |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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Angel with tattooed halo wings of purple tissue, bleeding violet streaks in the rain, held on with nothing more than dripping liquid webs, Vain! Weeping violent tears of red once again. Endless contrition ...and her name is DESCENTION. "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
this is just beautiful written...! Love, Virgin Suïcide And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back.......... |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
My apologies for the mispelling of DESCENSION....one of these days I will stop getting ahead of myself and do a spellcheck before I post.... : }~ "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
The spelling is not that important, my friend.... The thought of the poem was perfectly expressed and wonderful!! You can change the spelling if you want, but hold onto the thought!! Nice writing here... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
A, this is a very impressive work cat.... |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
this one is cool.. really cool.. wow. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I thought "Dissention" was spelt perfectly the way you did it. It reminded me of Descend-to go down. Loved the poem btw. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Chained2illusions Junior Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 45Elyria, Oh *at the moment* |
A, your writing takes my breath away! So much power in the tightest form possible..fantastic! Be Well Denise There is fire inside us all..it sparks with just the match. |
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