Dark Poetry #2 |
I saw God in a hand basket |
Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I saw God in a hand basket I swear I did he was looking at me and saying hey kid. Not like some who see him in a tree If they did he I’m sure he looked just like me. Or in a potato chip along with Elvis my God they just think they saw him even if they all applaud. Or his mother Mary in the shad of an old building I don’t think so that just doesn’t seem filling. No I see God in everything that there is, no little deities just to fizz. But in every breath every breath I breath in every spiders web in every web that’s weave. It’s the icon in God I attack not my faith in God I lack for you see I’m one that believes in the creator of all things. Not that God is a he or she But I’d much rather embrace a woman omnipotent deity than a man that looks like me. Joel. ----------------------------------------------------------------- I seem to always refer to God as a she just to mess with minds and icons of God. I’ve done it so long I don’t relies when I do it. Long ago teaching from my shaman tutor. She destroyed my Southern idea of God long ago, and showed me the light. of all things. Now I search the light within. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
I love the concept of God in a handbasket. It throws the mind a little. You have to think about it; people see "hell" there in that phrase. You have shown something many should see: that deity exists every day, in everything. and She loves you for it... |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well you seem to have gotten my vote again great work as always. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Love this Joel! How true |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Joel, this is very good. It says a lot. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Joel....I thoroughly enjoyed it....I'm still sitting her smiling. The line about Elvis.....that is SO true. (Sorry, I can't seem to get this silly grin off my face). Do it again....more. Hardrock |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Thanks guys , hahaha I guess that's all I have to say on that. just thanks. hahaha Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
ah yes, our inexplicable God. He is so very good. and joel, may i say, i am glad to see you on a different path for this one. it is time you stopped focusing on the pain. let go and let God. love ya kid. hee hee!!!!!! kynder A woman to a man is But a mere chapter, But a man to a woman Is an entire book.-- Kynder Howell |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Thanks kynder, and Hey that's my line. hhaha love ya kid. hhahaha ok you can have it for now. hahaha Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Joel,...I like how you think. hehe. This is great. He,...She,...whatever it may be, glad that it's there for you...and that you look towards the light. At a time like this,...I believe it to be important not to lose oneself. I have learned from you haha...and know that atleast that's important...not losing you. Thank you for this poem to read. Love ya. Spit. *Peace. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~~ ~Joel,..I had failed to mention the 1000!!!~ *Very busy you have been giving such kind words to everyone here. Thank you. * *Peace*. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Thanks Spit, you are a love of my life. yours forever. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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