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Dorothy Surrenders |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Courage? Yes, I'll pass that test, erase fine line foolhardiness... A brain? My god, I wish it'd stop. erase refrain of every thought. A heart? I wish it would not beat. erase the tears flow down my cheeks. My Wizard, won't you hear my plea? What have you in that bag for me? A witch's broom, I'll give to thee-- Send me home... eternity... |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Excellently written serenity, I enjoyed this very much... |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ohhh... very touching... enjoyed this immensely!  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I loved this serenity, it showed a great deal of heartache. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you---this is such a great place to slay my demons of depression...I thank you all much for your generosity. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Serenity, I like this one a lot. I have to say, the title caught me first, how original and creative this is. Catalinamoon |
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