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Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
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Netherlands

0 posted 2000-08-11 04:08 PM


astranged....abandoned....alone....left here....
strange....left....myself....feel free....
alone in this world, circled by them....
those who don't know, those who don't care....
astranged from myself, me is my friend....
she lets me know she suffers, I give a helping hand....
abandoned by her mother, she does not see....
the pain that's getting in, and just stays in here....
left all alone....no one who cares....
even her own leaves me....myself steps away....
I don't want to know me....how can I live....
a life like this....maybe i should wake up....
and think....but it just doesn't work....
it just starts all over again....so I go back....
to the place I left it the last time....
I grab my knife and start all over AGAIN....
like the last time....WHEN WILL IT END??????????


And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back..........

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Lil OnE
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since 1999-12-14
Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.
1 posted 2000-08-11 04:14 PM


WOW. That was awesome. I loved the part, "Even her own leaves me.... myself steps away". This is so powerful to me. I LOVE it. Keep it up! ~Lil OnE~

Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken.
~Lil OnE~



Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
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2 posted 2000-08-12 06:43 AM


well thank you...I wrote this when I got kinda depressed...I think...Maybe I just hate myself so much or something...Just can't stop thinking....

love, Virgin Suïcide...

And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back..........

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