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Wren
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since 2000-07-05
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0 posted 2000-08-10 11:45 PM



The dividing line
Across the cruel red sky
The tear begins
Cleaving the horizon
And killing the bleeding sky
With furious black stone
Violent dreams
Of collecting the battered limbs
Of a broken man
Crimson soaked linen
Wraps itself around my neck
Asleep at the foot of this shadowed monument
I feel her,
Flooding my veins
I know her....

Isis speaking:
If only he knew.....
I shall keep this dark jest to myself
The missing part I said I could not find
This most important nesessity
Osiris's petty manhood.....
I fed it to the cat

meow!


Note: I get in these man-hating moods sometimes....Sorry! This poem is a *um* different take on the Isis/Osiris ledgend....no offesnse to our dear poetic Isis....
Anyway...I'm going camping so I'll be away a bit.  

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bubbles chan
Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 17

1 posted 2000-08-10 11:49 PM


sick, twisted, and very in tuned to egyptian lore, you got the true meanning of the obelisk great!!!

Time and space are not constant, but floating around like the inside of a giant metaphysical lava lamp

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