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My cries echoe my scream
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My cries echoe my scream |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
The cries echoe my screams Can't you hear them seeping out That were once so closed within me. I can see the whole world echoes with my tears. That endlessly keep flowing into the bottomless pit. Echoes of my tears, Would you dare come near if you could see the darker side of my soul? Screams transcend where only I seem to just pretend and close them away forever but yet the tears cannot hide they glide along my cheeks until they hit the floor Yet still the screams stay locked for you see I through away the key long ago. Can you feel the echoes of my tears? So tragically they seal my fate. [This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 08-08-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Hi Rosebud, Do you need a shoulder to lean on? I'm only an icq or email away. Hope all is well with you. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thank you so much your quite unique I'm fine but I will seek you out if I need you thanks I don't know about you but I do have many different facets in my life and sometimes I guess this is just my faucet overflowing.. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Rose, I wonder if you would want this posted in a poetry forum, so people could enjoy it? I think Dark would be a great spot to share this at. Let me know, I can move it in a heartbeat! Very true emotions you've written here, I am sure we have all felt them at one time or another. ~Heather |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Yes I agree with you thank you go ahead thx for that. beam me up scottie lol |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thx xangel though you say I believe your an angel in disguise. I count it a privilege to able to share my emotions with you all. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
A very heartfelt poem. I really enjoyed the gloom of it. Quite good writing. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rosebud, This is good full of angst and sadness. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thank you so much fractal and kethry sometimes I really do feel this way I guess we all do. I guess just like anyone else I feel as If I'm alone in it. Sometimes on the outside all seems well but on the inside it's raging all the more. I guess somehow you just have to balance things out. I appreciate your responses. |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Beautiful descriptions and flows so nicely. I can only understand so well abt hiding the pain. ~Artistic~ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thank you artistic, sometimes I do feel like I shouldn't feel this way I sometimes believe I'll just always have a sad steak about me no matter how happy I am.thanks for reading. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I first saw this before it was copied here - so when I saw 'thread closed' I read the re's and followed it here. (I feel like Columbo.) No question in my mind it is well and beautifully written, but more importantly - it expresses emotions I am feeling frequently of late. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Thank you Wilfred I see you know I'm a woman of all traits. I sometimes try to throw off how i'm feeling but other days I really feel a gloom way down ,thank you for understanding I'm sure we can all relate to this. Generally I'm better at sharing happiness than sadness it's better to play it off than for me to share it. |
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bubbles chan Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 17 |
hey, great poem.. keep writing, i hope to see more like this Time and space are not constant, but floating around like the inside of a giant metaphysical lava lamp |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thank you so much bubbles in writing like this it seems to release apart of me which is hard to let go of. I've enjoyed the forum very much. |
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