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juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
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0 posted 2000-08-10 01:39 PM


The Beauty Of You

Most bright sun angels,  
Dance upon thy face,
Twirling merrily,
Their kisses of satin and lace,
To be near thee,
'Tis their pleasure bliss.
To touch thee,
The swirling rainbows,
Most desired wish.
Crimson roses in shame bow low,
So dull to thee,
They do compare.
The glorious moon,
Gazes softly upon thy hair.
The stars do shine,
But dimmer yet,
For thy soul,
Thy being,
They have caressed.




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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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1 posted 2000-08-10 02:38 PM


Soft and tender..James
juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-08-10 06:14 PM


Thanks James, that's exactly how I felt when I wrote it.  Juls
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-08-10 11:30 PM


Lovely, dare I say happy? Don't want to get bumped to the "happy" forum. Seriously, this was perfect and beautiful.
Catalinamoon..

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
4 posted 2000-08-11 02:02 AM


Yeah Cat, it would be happy if he was still mine.   ~~~~sigh~~~~
Juls

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