Dark Poetry #2 |
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Where some one you love is. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392![]() |
WHERE SOME ONE YOU LOVE IS. This eve it is extremely lonley... where some one you love is. This eve it is terribley cold... where some one you love is. This eve it is uncomparibly dark... where some one you love is. This eve there are chilling whispers coming from... where some one you love is. This eve there are arms reaching out for you from... where some one you love is. This eve there are memories screaming to not be forgotten from... where some one you love is. This eve there are tears falling on the cold soil... where some one you love is. This eve it is so very cold... where some one you love is... "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Powerful poem a-alibaster, and I can relate to it well. The sadness and loneliness are familiar to to me. But I enjoyed this piece very much, although it made me (more) sad. Yours truly ~Broken~ |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
sighing at the coldness one can feel when inside the memories are of warmth ~~soft hugs, a Maureen |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Interesting spin I wasen't expecting from simply reading the title. Good one! ![]() -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So cold, sad, and well written. Take care catalinamoon |
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