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lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

0 posted 2000-08-10 06:05 AM


Flower

Pretty little flower
In the dark you cower
Losing all your colour
Losing all your scent
On the wind they went
Leaving you in shade
A greyer shade of grey

Flower, you must seek the sun
To bring back your joy and fun
To restore your scent at dawn
And the colours you have worn



Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



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poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2000-08-10 07:37 AM


this is sooooo precious!
love this love this!!
~Dawn

whatcha doing in this darkness baby
when you know love will set you free?
will you stay in the sea forever
Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live

Wren
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

2 posted 2000-08-10 08:42 AM


How sweet! This one's a winner! Nice use of color.
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

allan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
3 posted 2000-08-10 01:01 PM


What's happening to you Uta??? All this colour! You'll be getting your marching orders from this dark cavern!

I liked this, it's sweet...

(But in 'Dark Passions?! lol!)

Why not come on over to the pub once in a while, get completely pissed, get up on one of the shaky tables and give us a good old rollicking live rendering of this one!  )

Allan

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2000-08-10 03:30 PM


Love the color. My interpretation here is that the flower is not getting what it needs to be happy. I relate, of course. Very pretty poem, in look and content
cat...

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
5 posted 2000-08-10 06:42 PM


Very nice.



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

6 posted 2000-08-10 11:24 PM


~What a pretty little flower,...in need of pretty little light.  Uta,...you...these words...these colors...mmm. Yes! Take care. *Peace.
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