Dark Poetry #2 |
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Flower |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Flower Pretty little flower In the dark you cower Losing all your colour Losing all your scent On the wind they went Leaving you in shade A greyer shade of grey Flower, you must seek the sun To bring back your joy and fun To restore your scent at dawn And the colours you have worn Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is sooooo precious! love this love this!! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
How sweet! This one's a winner! Nice use of color. -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
What's happening to you Uta??? All this colour! You'll be getting your marching orders from this dark cavern! I liked this, it's sweet... (But in 'Dark Passions?! lol!) Why not come on over to the pub once in a while, get completely pissed, get up on one of the shaky tables and give us a good old rollicking live rendering of this one! ![]() ![]() |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love the color. My interpretation here is that the flower is not getting what it needs to be happy. I relate, of course. Very pretty poem, in look and content cat... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very nice. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~What a pretty little flower,...in need of pretty little light. Uta,...you...these words...these colors...mmm. Yes! Take care. *Peace. |
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