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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Loneliness Can hurt All alone In a cold world No one there for me I stumble Over an unseen rock Hope Seemingly flies away Leaving me all alone A sob wells I fight it down. Cannot cry I do not want to cry For it is weak Still alone I continue on Fighting against the dark I continue to look For the light ___________________ ~Artistic~ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Artistic this was so beautiful I guess sometimes I to have felt the pain even though there are lots of people around they all seem to be going about their routine and it takes so much to just reach out to someone else. Thanks for sharing |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
at least you havent completely lost hope...keep looking for that light! very well done..i look forward to more! ~Dawn< !signature--> whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 08-10-2000).] |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Thank you Rosebud and PoutPrincess... I was unsure if this was the right place to post this poem...! This was written when I was deeply wounded, but just did not to give up all hope...! Thanks once again ~Artistic~ "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Art- Good one! The simplicity of this poem adds to its charm. Good emotional impact!  -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
Oh my friend...what wonderful description. I espically like the end...I continue to look for the light. WOW! Dee "It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
Keep looking for that light. I know i do. This one is so well written, i can't add anymore. I echo the comments of the others. ilph. |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Wren- Thank you! Glad u enjoyed it...Dedreia- Thank you... I think everyone always tries to look for the light one way or another... Ilph- Thank you, I'm glad to know it's well done... Glad you enjoyed it... ~Artistic~ "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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