Dark Poetry #2 |
Defeating The Pain |
juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Looking into the face of pain, A bitter reflection I see. Tears slowly falling, Like hallow empty rain. Where is my knight? In his armor true. How cruel you were, Pretending that knight was you. Gathering my courage, I make a plea. Time, oh unstopable time, Be not my enemy. Strength be beside me close. Together we will conquer, And slay this dragon of loneliness, That threatens my very soul. I shall stand and wave my flag, In victory so proud. And you, oh cruel impostor, Will only be a memory, Condemned to a desert cloud. [This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Juliet, I loved this one!! I know that pain your speaking of, and hope soon you find that true love to keep. Excellent read!! I enjoyed alot. The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Oh YES!! This was GOOD! It showed the pain and loneliness so well GREAT JOB! DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Deborah, thanks girly. I hope I do too. Trying not to look though. I figure if you don't look for love it will find you, if that makes any sense. Take care my friend, Juls |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Dkw, thanks very much. That means alot to me. You have a great day, Juls |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I shall stand and wave my flag, In victory so proud. And you, oh cruel impostor, Will only be a memory, Condemned to a desert cloud. .... Excellent work, Juliet... regards, sudhir |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, Juliet, so you have met my knight, and he is a knave to you as well..Shall we keep open to the possibilities? I know the lonliness well. Very nice poem, sad but true. Catalinamoon |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sudhir, thanks so much. As always you're very kind. Take care, Juls |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Catalinamoon, he sure gets around doesn't he. But time will certainly bring the real thing one day. Here's to that day girl. Take care, Juls |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Enjoyed muchly... and tis the maids who break the hearts of the knights.....lol |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Now Prometheus, are you sure about that,hehe....And thanks for the nice words. Juls |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Juliet this was very touching and so beautiful. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww Rosebud thank you so much. Juls |
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