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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Today I have no special words nothing but ordinary fills my mind. I need to say something but it escapes me it's right there on the tip of my keyboard.. Like a breath of air waiting to be expelled. Indiscriminate visions show me an empty page I am not happy being mute... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Aww Cat,...ouch. I've been there lately. Sometimes it feels like my head and heart are going to explode yet I can't come to a way of releasing. Feels like the part of my brain where all the words flow from is kinked like a garden hose,...ceasing gallons of internal goo that seethe to escape. *sigh*. Very nice way of putting it here. Glad to 'see' ya this morning. Take care. *Peace. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
wow...i can say..you sound really good for someone mute! great words here! ~Dawn |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ever heard the sound of silence... its beautiful... but this poem expresses your situation to a tee... nice work... regards, sudhir |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
catalina... Ok...there are some people who wish that I would become mute, but I'm not ready yet!!! This is a great piece, and I think it describes a poet's nitemare, or any writer for that matter. Great job here, my friend! I have only one goal in life.. It Is: To have more than one goal in Life!! ~ ~ by Sunny ~ ~ |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh but how you awaken with words that we all love and enjoy!!! Excellent way to express how we all may feel. Very good indeed!!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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