Dark Poetry #2 |
The way things are |
Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
the title speaks for itself ~the way things are~ love exists not. not in me, but in the child of an idol brain. and there love is nourished and treasured. and there love stays until it has matured. then love leaves, and begins to push hate into love and kills itself by hate and hate makes love unworthy of peace. and peace can no longer touch the loved hate and love falls not in love but in death from having known no peace. then peace becomes war from having no love, and therefore no love of peace. and yet hate of war creates more war. and not removed is hate and war, but more seen is war and hate. no love or peace ever create. soon hate will die, and war will end. and love and peace will begin again. and on and on this poor cycle go, when it ends, shall i never know. for methinks love is true and not. but hate is not but oh so true. for i feel as i do, a love made for you. Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Clever work here hon! Love and hate indeed exist in us all, it is the degree of each that matters. Love exists even in the devil himself, but to a minor degree.. Your love is there, it's just hiding at times I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
thats just the thing i know its there and i hate it.... i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
A little confusing the first time around... but yes all of those contradictions are kind of- not. And there has always been a fine line between love and hate. Strong emotion here. Jenn |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I just checked your profile... U live near me. And you should never say your writing isn't good! Writing of all kinds is good and everyone's work constantly evolves! Jenn |
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