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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-08-06 01:03 AM


Sand my soul,
And remove the wrinkles from your past,

Polish my heart,
And let the shine of love fill your eyes,

Water my mind,
And let the fruits of knowledge fill you up,

Tell me your sins,
And watch them shift into life,

Confess your beliefs,
And embrace the forgotten truth,

Stop judging,
And gain thyself.

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Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).


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Kethry
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1 posted 2000-08-06 01:06 AM


Oooooh I really like this. Stop judging and gain yourself. good stuff
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole

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2 posted 2000-08-06 10:26 AM


Simple and powerful. Great words.
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3 posted 2000-08-06 12:15 PM


very, very nice...I liked this much.
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4 posted 2000-08-06 12:34 PM


Oh how beautiful and perfect!! What a wonderful way to express feelings here!! More, More!!! Loved it!!!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Xeonox
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5 posted 2000-08-06 08:50 PM


You guys spoil me with your lovely comments. Thank you.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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6 posted 2000-08-06 08:53 PM


~Superb advice. Oh yep!!! Truth. Great. Thanks. Take care X. *Peace.
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7 posted 2000-08-06 09:50 PM


I like.... definitly!! Good job.
Jenn

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