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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Sand my soul, < !signature-->And remove the wrinkles from your past, Polish my heart, And let the shine of love fill your eyes, Water my mind, And let the fruits of knowledge fill you up, Tell me your sins, And watch them shift into life, Confess your beliefs, And embrace the forgotten truth, Stop judging, And gain thyself. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). [This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Oooooh I really like this. Stop judging and gain yourself. good stuff Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Simple and powerful. Great words. Cat... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
very, very nice...I liked this much. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh how beautiful and perfect!! What a wonderful way to express feelings here!! More, More!!! Loved it!!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
You guys spoil me with your lovely comments. Thank you. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Superb advice. Oh yep!!! Truth. Great. Thanks. Take care X. *Peace. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I like.... definitly!! Good job. Jenn |
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