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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
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0 posted 2000-08-06 01:26 PM


Lost In Days Of Berry Red

lost in days of berry red
of purple turns in face
lost in nights of darkened skies
of hearts in empty space
unconscious times of timber ticks
of rounding corners by
of simple sadness slipping through
of flavored whipping ties
strolling, stumbling by it all
by tokens of distaste
by sweating smiles with broken teeth
by buckets of times haste
hollow case of toiled skin
of lifeless blood throughout
of veins in need of satin smiles
of answers to life's doubts.


© Copyright 2000 SpitFire - All Rights Reserved
Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
1 posted 2000-08-06 01:38 PM


Spitfire....I love the way you write period!! ( LOL) Seriously I do and I am sometimes at a loss for words!! This was another excellent piece, filled with imagery....just great!!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
2 posted 2000-08-06 01:52 PM


Another perfect piece, I am reading this on my metaphorical porch right now. Great poem. Excellent images, you got me thinking about this one.

"To the centre of the
city where all roads
meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank,
searching for you," Joy divison

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-08-06 05:29 PM


SF, as usual, this is great. The way you put things together always amazes me.
Cat...

Isabelle Garnier
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since 2000-08-06
Posts 2
Massachusetts USA
4 posted 2000-08-06 07:57 PM


I really liked the images you painted here. Lovely work. Makes me think too. I look forward to reading more...

Isabelle
"Champion the right to be yourself. Dare to be different and to set your own pattern: Live your own life, and follow your own star." ~Lin Yu

Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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since 2000-02-12
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Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.
5 posted 2000-08-06 10:45 PM


You have a very colourful way of expressing yourself (sorry about the pun). I do like this piece and your work in general. Keep it up!

Sing while you may
-The Prophet Q'spel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Q'spel


Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
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Somewhere, between here and there
6 posted 2000-08-06 10:49 PM


Superb imagery.  As always, good job.



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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

7 posted 2000-08-07 12:14 PM


It's all true--I seek you out to read, spitfire, and you never disappoint me!!!  You're an excellent writer, and this piece is as worthy as all of your others to prove that point.  Great flow, great imagery, and the emotion is there...need I say more?
Smiles to you!  and peace, of course!

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 2000-08-07 01:29 AM


Wonderful flow, wonderful imagery and emotions in such meanderings great work again, as always!  *Peace* to you too hon  

To believe In Karma, is to believe in Destiny. From birth to death every man is weaving thread by thread his destiny. Karma is brought about through

lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
9 posted 2000-08-07 04:28 AM


Awesome, Fire, as always!

  


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



Wren
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

10 posted 2000-08-07 09:41 AM


SF-
Another masterpeice from our masterpoet! Wonderful work, as usual!  
-Wren


The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
11 posted 2000-08-07 09:44 AM


Fire, What can I say that hasn't been said, superb.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole

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