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Lost In Days Of Berry Red
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Lost In Days Of Berry Red |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Lost In Days Of Berry Red lost in days of berry red of purple turns in face lost in nights of darkened skies of hearts in empty space unconscious times of timber ticks of rounding corners by of simple sadness slipping through of flavored whipping ties strolling, stumbling by it all by tokens of distaste by sweating smiles with broken teeth by buckets of times haste hollow case of toiled skin of lifeless blood throughout of veins in need of satin smiles of answers to life's doubts. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Spitfire....I love the way you write period!! ( LOL) Seriously I do and I am sometimes at a loss for words!! This was another excellent piece, filled with imagery....just great!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Another perfect piece, I am reading this on my metaphorical porch right now. Great poem. Excellent images, you got me thinking about this one. "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
SF, as usual, this is great. The way you put things together always amazes me. Cat... |
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Isabelle Garnier New Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 2Massachusetts USA |
I really liked the images you painted here. Lovely work. Makes me think too. I look forward to reading more... Isabelle "Champion the right to be yourself. Dare to be different and to set your own pattern: Live your own life, and follow your own star." ~Lin Yu |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
You have a very colourful way of expressing yourself (sorry about the pun). I do like this piece and your work in general. Keep it up! Sing while you may -The Prophet Q'spel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Q'spel |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Superb imagery. As always, good job. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It's all true--I seek you out to read, spitfire, and you never disappoint me!!! You're an excellent writer, and this piece is as worthy as all of your others to prove that point. Great flow, great imagery, and the emotion is there...need I say more? Smiles to you! and peace, of course! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wonderful flow, wonderful imagery and emotions in such meanderings great work again, as always! *Peace* to you too hon  To believe In Karma, is to believe in Destiny. From birth to death every man is weaving thread by thread his destiny. Karma is brought about through |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Awesome, Fire, as always! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
SF- Another masterpeice from our masterpoet! Wonderful work, as usual! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Fire, What can I say that hasn't been said, superb. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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