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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States 
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Wondering... I sit here wondering... Is this love for real? Or am I just chasing a fantasy? Everyday I become more confused. Confusion... Confusion overwhelms me... Are you my destiny? Or have I already found it? I feel so much passion for you. Passion... The Passion is hot like fire... How can you make my skin burn so? And have never touched me? Your passion consumes me. Consumation... I feel this love needs consumated... If I come to you will you want me? Or am I just a fantasy to you? Oh how I long for you. Longing... I spend everyday longing for you... Do you long for me too? Will we ever be together? I do so truly love you... Love... My love for you is overpowering. Do you feel it too? Is it as real to you as me? I was just wondering... "It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow. This poem is like a string of pearls. with drop upon drop building together to make a glorious whole. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Nice work there Buzz! I know exactly what you're going through here, been there recently myself. Thanks for making me feel a little less alone here : ) Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Dee, the only way to know is to go to him. And even then you may not be sure. But I am going for it myself, hope you find your answer, I sure do know the longing, the difficulty of wanting the one far away. Peace. Cat/ Sandra |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Love the flow here, how everything connects..and hope you do get what you want!!! This was full of emotions and I loved it!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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