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Rex
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2000-08-05 12:56 PM


Relentless Silence that enfolds all Life
In Death! Enwrapping mute and somber wings
About the heart, as when a vulture swoops
Above his helpless prey, and dropping...clings!
Immutable Silence!...Ah!, Sound, burst forth
In some vast cacophony that will rend
The skies apart, and make the trees to sob
Aloud in grief, and writhe and twist and bend
Until they sweep the very ground from which
Their roots have sprung! And whirl the boundless
sand
In choking clouds, to whip in heedless rush
Across bare miles of long forgotten land!
Sever the night with swords of flame, and fling
Discordant thunders till a churning sea
Retreats in awe before the mighty wrath
That shames its roar by deep intensity!
Make all the earth in anguish quake, and cause
Titanic winds to wail with spectral cry---
And slay this sensuous soundlessness
Lest one, in silence bound...
by silence die!



© Copyright 2000 Rex E. Alford - All Rights Reserved
AnabelleBlue
Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 28
NM, USA
1 posted 2000-08-05 02:53 PM


Absolutely powerful.  I enjoyed your phrasing immensely.  

Ana

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
2 posted 2000-08-05 03:55 PM


Ah!, Sound, burst forth
In some vast cacophony that will rend
The skies apart, and make the trees to sob
Aloud in grief, and writhe and twist and bend
Until they sweep the very ground from which
Their roots have sprung!

Wow...next time I take a walk in the  woods I will be a bit more aware of the noise of the silent....reminds me (must be my butterfly day *s)

Listening for the Noiseless

listening for the noiseless
my senses on alert
soaking all there is to hear
though not a sound nor word

tuning out or tuning in
today no noise be found
am listening for the noiseless
while resting, lying down

a butterfly in flight I see
no sound does beauty make
breezes pass through poplar trees
leaf floats upon the lake

noiseless seems to be the call
of all I hear today
my lids are closed in quietness
to dream this day away ...

M*99

always enjoy your words Rex

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2000-08-06 09:15 AM


And lo a trump shall sound and the earth destroyed. Feels like the end on the world but again loved the passion in this poem.
Be well
Kethry.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole

catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2000-08-06 10:55 AM


Beautiful, as always.
Sandra

Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
5 posted 2000-08-06 01:14 PM


Rex, just to be able to write this way.......so talented!! Another wonderful piece from you, thanks!!!!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

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