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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i was going to call this one daddy but the new title is more fitting. and sorry for stacking one after another...i have been able to post in a few days. ~Father Dear~ i stopped myself tonight. i stopped the knife. i wanted to hurt him, but i never win. its hard to sleep at night, with all my active thoughts. the dreams that speak to me, are not what i want. he was never loving, caring, or generous. he just made me hate myself. so what i do, i must. he makes me want to die, commit suicide. the way he treats me, its emotional beating. Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
Yet another powerful piece from you. Good work. Sing while you may -The Prophet Q'spel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Q'spel |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Powerful piece Nikolette. Did we have the same father? Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
for your sake kethry i hope not...because i wouldn't wish anyone to have such a horrible father Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Nikolette, as all your poems are, this one is simply fantastic. I am so sorry about your father. And I know it's difficult, but try not to let him get to you. Remember that you have a great gift, and he can't take that from you.  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i wnat to thank you all for your kind awords...yours, Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Nikolette,...that was very deep and painful to read. Gripping. Expressed well. Please take care. *Peace. |
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