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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
He fancied himself A fine gent Eager to serve That talk of him.. Was desultory They were wenches He said.. Trying to destroy the fabric of his daily existence He was a depraved soul Hopeless prey Why then was His claim to nobility.. A disorderly pile Of crumbs The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Ouch, I feel the pain that you write about here. Thanks for sharing. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nice one here. It touched me where I live, with my delusions of grandeur. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Fine snapshot, deb! Very well done!! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love this Deb, sounds like the same guy as in mine. Too many of these and not enough of the good ones. Sandra [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Goodness,...you and Cat are really setting out some very real and definately depressing images of these fellas. Eeek. Deb1,...this is great in it's writing yet so yuck in it's truth. Super portrayal. Take care. *Peace. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Thanks everyone for the nice responses!! Its good sometimes just to reflect and write about our experiences! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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