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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Here I sit in this room full of gloom crying out like a loon wishing for someone to confide in. Instead of looking for a hole to hide in. My heart filled with worry and pain My mind feeling I must be insane I can not believe I am so lame I am ashame. Selfish and stubborn and wanting it all destroying others lives as I hide within these walls The devil is calling today and I give it my all I try to stand tall only to feel myself fall The worry I cant stop the mess cant be mopped I can only stop. ........... for I will never be on top and dream of a fatal hop The tears they run free as I realize its wrong for me to be. Im just real sad tonight just dumping thoughts and feelings. Bluebrdy65 |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Damn, this is the way I been feeling. I mean this girl I am dating. I have not heard from her in over a week now. I feel every word in your poem for I have experience all the emotions that you describe in your poem this last week. Thank you for putting it into words. Thank you very much for letting me know that I do not suffer alone.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Im sorry your feeling sad....yet you did a great job at writing and expressing your emotions!! Iloved the poem, and hope your feel better!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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