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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
My evening shines in memory.. The night had been Spontaneous.. As the song of a bird Gingerly touching Left my skin feeling.. As if a soft-winged moth Had fluttered against it As I breathe in.. The morning air of heaven As I exhale.. Yestereve Rapture.. Assaults my mind The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
You go girl. I just do not know how to describe your god given talent. Great work as usual. Keep it up.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is sooo good. I like Rapture assaults my soul. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Hmmmm. I could *feel* this. Lovely! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, beautiful depiction of a happy moment in time. Love the wording used, perfect. Cat... |
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