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Thoughts of Crimson Red
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Thoughts of Crimson Red |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Thoughts of Crimson Red I'm halfway through the path of life looking back, so far the view. Tomorrow is the closest coming, I dream such thoughts, I do. Of fantasy, not one be writ that matches feelings' hold. Words can never escape within expressing what's untold. Stand before you naked, I of fruitful hiding years. Of seeking one who's ornaments of want would ease my fears. What fate belies this unwhole life? Are left just downward years? Or is it time for wings to fly and dry up raining tears? I wear my skin much prouder now. It cloaks me wrinkled, not. Thoughts appease me, tease me, please me, to tranquilize the hot, I image you, as you do me, I ripen with each breath. A lady once, feel sinful now. Is this the path towards death? My curfew calls, commands me so, submission, how I dread. My other half of what is whole left thoughts of crimson red. M 6**99 |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Moon, this is simply perfect!  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I stand at the crossroads of life is it half over or well begun I do not know but careworn strife will see me spend my days in the sun. I loved the juxtaposition of words that made it so familiar. brilliant. Keth "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
lotharingia hardly has perfect ever been attained by me..but I will accept your compliment graciously...thank you ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Maureen, I too think this was really well written, and loved the way it flows..Just a wonderful job!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Maureen, wow a beautifully writeen piece. Wonderful images. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Keth I think truth comes across in writing...this was the day before that 50th birthday..a traumatic day for me ~~softly Maureen |
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AnabelleBlue Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 28NM, USA |
You always just amaze me with your talent. Another fine one, M. Ana |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Deborah1 thank you, last year was a time of many hurts, losses and growth in me that caused much introspection and writing...I am trying to write of happier things this year..although life does have it's up and downs ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I like to think that the future holds much promise for us, makes it easier to get through the day...lol. Great read! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Maureen, just lovely, written with a perfect touch. And the feelings, ah, I know them well. Catalinamoon |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Your poetry is exquisitvely beautiful, how have I missed these? They are wonderful, all of them I've read so far, and I've been reading all of them! Kathleen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Brian aging isn't all that easy *s Anabelle thank you, I have so much in me for these 30 odd years of adulthood and they are all erupting within the last year and a half...in poetry I wonder sometimes why I was so hyper inside..all this wanting to come out I guess ~~smiling Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
EagleOne glad you enjoyed the read ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
catalinamoon..thanks for your sweet words always...you were one of my first responders ever and I appreciate your warmth Kathleen..I don't know how they get missed sometimes they slide away until someone discovers and brings it forward..I just wait..eventually I will be noticed (it's like in real life you know *s) |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
What fate belies this unwhole life? Are left just downward years? Or is it time for wings to fly and dry up raining tears? i love this.......i hope one day you soar... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Nik..I am trying..just a fledgling all over again ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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