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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia 
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Show me how to seduce you Let me lure you From your hiding place Draw you closer to me I want to impress you I've fallen victim to bliss With every word you breathe And every silent sound you make When will you embrace me And confide those secrets you shelter I only want to be your muse And maybe your mistress I want your body But i need your mind Let me tempt you The same way you've been tempting me. I know a place where I can go when Im low,into your arms I can go. ~The Lemonheads |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
pout princess, I can the twin surges of desire here.Intimacay and communication. How lovely. Be well Keth "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Poutprincess, I agree with Kethry, I get the feeling of sharing "both" the mind, and the emotions together. Well written piece, Another great poem!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Kethry: communication is one of the most intimate things you can do. Crawling into someone's bed is one thing...but crawling into their mind is divine bliss. thank you for your reply! Deborah:thank you as well for enjoying my poem! comments like that keep me going! I know a place where I can go when Im low,into your arms I can go. ~The Lemonheads |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Dawn, a great poem very hot. "I want your body But i need your mind Let me tempt you The same way you've been tempting me." I agree we need both in a lover. really enjoyed the poem. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Dawn, This is fully you. The you I know so well. Great writtings here!! Beth~ |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
There are so many facets to a person's being, too many people focus on only the one. I am happy to hear that you are not one of them. Good work here. Sing while you may -The Prophet Q'spel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Q'spel |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is wonderful ! And I agree whole-heartedly that sharing someone's mind is the greatest thing indeed!  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh yes, I am in full agreement on this. A beautiful physical relationship goes only a very short way without an intimacy of soul and mind. Great, expressive poem. Loved it. Catalinamoon |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Beth: you are a sweety! Ian: thank you so much..its nice to be appreciated! lotharingia: and you are wonderful as well! thank you so much! catalinamoon: its so nice to hear everyone here agrees with me...love is more than physical..and you all truly know this! thank you very much! whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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