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Rattle of the Witch's Dance
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Rattle of the Witch's Dance |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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A simple coal left unaware a rush of wind to beware defiant now, I lift my chin, breath of fire, dragon's grin. Rattle of the witch's dance, greet this moon upon the wax-- Hecate she will dance in me, I cast the bones, I set me free... Temperance may now be damned-- slash and burn upon the land... nothing now to understand... sparking flame of glory's hand... Guardians, I call on thee, whispered cries eternity, escape my soul, love's reprimand, may this plea be as command-- my will, thine will-- So mote it be. (an edit, to change ONE LETTER...I mispelled "temperance", imagine that...lol...) [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
By the powers of three times three, make them see, make them see... Wonderful wiccan story of an aching heart. Well done  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Isis--so happy that you understood...thank you...was worried that this might be misconstrued...I thank you again, three times three! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
serenity, your words are quite enchanting, magical poetic. spell blinding. OK enough of the puns. Loved the poem. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity...not to bright about these things, but I did love the poem...and the visuals you created were magical. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Ok, I’m trying to write this without using any puns…here goes. Its nice that no one misinterpreted your poem. I know how that feels. There has been a wave of innovative themes and designs, I don’t know what started it, but I hope It continues. Haha, no puns!! ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all, I love ya all much...but the sun is coming up, and I've not a damned clue as to where my "ray-bans" are...arrggggggghh...hiss..hiss..off to the crypt I creep...ouch. damned tail. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Loved the earth magic and the wiccan theme. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
*simply smiling* you are too good! |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
...and the aching of a witch....could be the worst of all... Lovely written!! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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