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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Nightmare Hollow rushing Up down waves Sounds of nothing Crush and fade A sodium bite On fingers and tongue A shower of spite Stinging me numb Tears in my lungs Choking me dumb A crystal crack Under the door Shrinks slowly back Then grows once more An angel of flame Flares into shape Wishing me away Before I awake Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
me too. sigh...nice portrayal here...I could so much relate. |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
Sounds like a bad one. The dreams we dream are but phantoms, they harm or heal only if we give them life. Nicely done. Sing while you may -The Prophet Q'spel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Q'spel |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
You have more than good skills to put to words what run in your thoughts... that's why it's a pleasure to read your works... regards, sudhir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
How do you do this? Consistently good work with powerful undercurrents. Bravo! Kethry "There are times in life a kindred spirit comes along. Hold onto those people. They are what makes this life worth living."- Anon |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Uta~~I agree! Another wonderful piece from You! Keep them coming! Take care... ~Sash~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Uta,...your writings always stick in my head. I sort of memorize bits of them and find myself reciting them throughout my day. Needless to say,...they have a lasting effect. Super scary. Take it EZ. *Peace. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Uta..I agree with everyone. You have such a magnificent mind...and it shows in your writings. This poem is superb. Hardrock |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
I agree with all that's been said... More, more... This one is a beaut and quite possibly my favourite of yours Uta. Sublime imagery control here...  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
lotharingia, this one sent shivers down my spine. very dark, really enjoyed the read. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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