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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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You and I sit under the shadow of this tree < !signature-->I wish I could take you away and show you the meaning of being free, Look in your eyes sends shivers down my spine, Pain in your heart shatters my hope, How can I let you be when you have become a part of me, My love for you can never come to an end, Unburden your pain onto shoulders of mine, Every moment apart weakens me to my limit, Screaming in terror my heart awakens from these nightmares, Crying in silence I pass each moment, Why must you suffer while I watch and wait? Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). [This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 08-03-2000).] |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Why indeed? This is very well expressed. A question that cannot be answered, though ... Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
I like the crying in silence bit. Friend or parent? I know I've felt like that for my children's suffering. Be well Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh X,...this is so sincere. A yearning cry. So full of a desire to understand and help. Oh so well expressed. Take it easy you. *Peace. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Actually Lynne it is the love of my life(or someone that I love very much).  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Life’s most exquisite suffering is always done sweet silence. I can offer you no more advice than this: Love is strong yes, but not omnipotent. Find another route. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Good job! sounds like some of mynightmares . |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Good job! sounds like some of mynightmares . Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
ahhhh...i see very well wehre u are coming from..this is a great poem n i hope u frigure it all out as well. Much love~ MiSeRyDivine~~ All i want in life is to be happy It seems to me How messed up things can be Everytime i get ahead I fell more dead ~KoRn~~ |
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