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The Silence |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
The door shuts softly Footsteps whisper up the stairs Silently, street clothes drop to the floor A nightgown slithers over shoulders Bed springs creak...in protest The wind murmurs...she's home. Two feet hit the floor A door slams loudly Footsteps pound noisily up the stairs Her door slams open Where have you been? The silent stillness shatters Linda Tiuch |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
very very well done linda. what an image and moment in time you capture here. excellent work. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ah Gosh,...you got me with this one. I was there. You've captured this so well that I could feel the anticipation as those feet pounded up those stairs. Well done. Take it easy. *Peace. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
What an image! Perfect! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Mmmm. I like. What a wonderful image you've created with your words. Joy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oooh, that was a good one, L, feel the stress in the person listening to the footsteps. Intense. |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Linda --- I would not want to be the one on the other side of that door...I've heard those footsteps!!! Wonderful images you've brushed with your pen, felt like I was right there. Bonnie |
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