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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2000-08-02 07:03 AM

And now the sun
is creeping
into my sky
I do not
give a damn
in sigh
I do not
give a damn
at all...
the sun is rising,
shadows tall...
where is the darkness
that I crave?
I'll close my eyes,
succomb to grave,
all my love,
all that I gave,
all that I could,
I forgave.
every breath,
each thought, believed,
I love you less--
for that, I grieve...
I'd love you more,
myself deceived,
vanquished
heart of yesterday.
All that I could,
I forgave.

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

1 posted 2000-08-02 07:37 AM

All my love
All that I gave
All that I could
I forgave..
So well spoken, nice job!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2000-08-02 10:04 AM

WOW serenity

what a flow...

And now the sun
is creeping
into my sky
..
..
vanquished
heart of yesterday.
All that I could,
I forgave.

.....
wonderful indeed!

regards,
sudhir

Lynne Dale
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 114
Melbourne Victoria

3 posted 2000-08-02 10:14 AM

vanquished heeart of yesterday.
Truly deserving of a place in passions.
Be well

Kethry.
When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2000-08-02 02:03 PM

serenity--you express so well your feelings here...straight from the heart...take care of it..hugs!

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

5 posted 2000-08-02 09:35 PM

~Ahh Man! I could hear this being read TO me. Wow, what an affect. Sensational. It rolled out of you so well. It just went...along with itself so well. Dig it. Take care you. *Peace.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2000-08-03 01:42 AM

I thank you all much, you all make me feel better, thanks for caring Martie, and spitfire, it means much...and again, thanks to all..

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2000-08-03 08:02 AM

Perfect flow, intensely beautiful words, awesome poem.
Thanks, I love it.
Catalinamoon

Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art.
Merrit Malloy

misscris
Junior Member

since 2000-07-17

Posts 27
Leawood, KS, USA

8 posted 2000-08-03 04:50 PM

Serenity

I search the forum for your powerfully vivid posts...this one was more than I expected. Very well done.
misscris

hope the tips for life are helping.

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

9 posted 2000-08-03 07:06 PM

That darkness is always within you S'en... look for it and it will bring you warmth.

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