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Allstaria22 Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 83MN USA |
my little friend my helper my biggest comfort so small so intimidating help me stop needing wanting longing for the release you give me you have control over my whole life you need to destroy me i love you i hate you help me stop you call to me i fall again into the unbearable pit of need help me stop a pill a smoke a drink a man silently killing me slowly totally help me stop. Isaiah 1:18 "Everyone loves a rose, will you be thankful for the thorns?" |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is different but I like it. I hope to read more of your work. so if you like keep posting some here. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Here is your stop sign. I guess so many have this habbit and is killing people every day. what a terable loss to humans. this hits the heart of it. a good post. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Silently killing me...slowly. THAT is killing ME. That line hurts to read. As Joel has said,...it IS a loss,...a terrible one. Take care. *Peace. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Powerful poem. I like the way you have written it - short lines... in a way it gives a poem so much more depth. Take care. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I like the style you wrote this and for what it's worth, the only one who can make it stop is you. |
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