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tookabear Junior Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 28Mansfield, TX USA |
Never Forgotten By Kristin L. Evans I was only eight when it began Late at night, when I was alone You preyed on my innocence and my trust How did I know that it was wrong?? You did things so horrible to me My soul and body were bared What you did to that little girl Left me feeling alone and scared You said it was to show your love By taking my body for your use But now I know that what happened to me Wasn't love; it was abuse All the dirty things you did to me Won't wash away with rain Nothing on earth will rid my heart Of this neverending pain I hope that you hurt as much as I do Or do you even remember what you did Nothing will make up for the pain you caused When I was just a kid The physical scars you put on my body Have since healed with time But my pain still shows on the outside Whenever the child inside of me starts to cry That little eight year old girl Had to grow up way too soon And all of the hurt and pain that you have caused Will always be remembered; like a flower that forever blooms [This message has been edited by tookabear (edited 07-31-2000).] |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Oh my!! I could feel your pain so freely in this poem. I am not sure if this happened to you or not, either way, its a tragedy!  But you did do a lovely job explaining it. WOW! I cant get over the pain I sill feel in it. Nice job my Friend!DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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tookabear Junior Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 28Mansfield, TX USA |
I wrote this poem about the abuse I suffered at the hands of my former stepfather from the time I was 8 until I was 13. It's one of the first poems I ever wrote. I'd really appreciate feedback and comments. Thanks! |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i cry no tears today, for you have obviously had enough for all of us...i liekd this poem...but not the reasoning for it...my appologies for the world and society we conduct... yours always, Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kristin, what a horrible cruel thing for any child to experience. I often hate this world. and cannot even believe how horrid it can be. But love is here too, hang on, a few sparkles of light in the world of darkness. They are there, we have to look hard sometime. Peace Catalinamoon Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art. Merrit Malloy |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
tookabear, Oh.. What grief. I love the poem, its the topic that hurts. Im truly sorry for your torrment at such a young age. Im like Cat, I can`t understand life at times. Keep writing and release some pain, we are very understanding here in DP. tookabear,you took my Bear? hugs,kisses and lolipops!! LarBear |
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tookabear Junior Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 28Mansfield, TX USA |
To all of you who have responded to my poem, thank you. I have had people read the poem and call me sick, disgusting, then tell me the abuse was my fault. LarBear: "tookabear" was my father's nickname for me when I was young. I'm not really sure what it means or where it came from. Again, thank you all. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
tookabear, I could never begin to express my sorrow for your experience, nor can I say I know a pain that deep. But I give to you my deepest wishes that you find the courage to heal. A well written poem, I just wish it was fictional...This is a tragedy. The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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