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Salt in my eye
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Salt in my eye |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
here i go just gonna think some more... ~salt in my eye~ too many tears i've cried for you, salt in my eye. these emotions are so true, the way you make me feel is more than i want. i dont want to fall for you, the stupid things i do! i'm falling asleep now, your face is in my mind. i dont want to cry for you, salt in my eye. try to push it away, but love always stays. Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
How sad, Niko! And very good! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
This is very poetic and yes you can write. Kethry Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I agree,...'tis very sad and very good. Salt in My Eye,...I love that. Welcome here!!! Be well NS. *Peace. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well i voted again and this is also very good and i hope to see alot more from you. i enjoyed this one alot and hope you keep it up you are a good writer. and please check your email I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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