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The last words of A Dying Love
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The last words of A Dying Love |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
he stopped loving me a year ago...but i still feel the pain of my only love. ~The last words of A Dying Love~ Hang up, it's all gone. "I like being alone", Well I don't. "I'm gone", I'm still here waiting for you. It's left me now, no more pain. Wait, here it comes again. He's playing games again. I wish i could win this one. All my time trying to forget, such things that i regret. I can't do it anymore. Maybe I'll try just once. For Him. He knows what it does to me. The pain, the agony. He won't love me, but he can play. Why do I let myself love him to death? Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
beautiful...depressing...truthful...everything a great poem should be...keep it up  EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Don't let yourself love him to death! There are many more fields to plough, and not all of them are arid! Very good expression here! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nik, I honestly have known this pain, and it has happened more than once. The funny thing is, each one still hurts a little. But the worst of the pain will go away,I think its so important to not let him tease you back and forth. If he is just playing with your feelings, it is cruel, and he does not deserve any of your time or love. (I know, easy to say and hard to do) Just want to send you some support. Lots of us at DP have been there, and happy things are still coming to you, so believe. Take care Catalinamoon Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art. Merrit Malloy |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Keep moving on the pain will go away if you let it. you deserve better than a games player unless it's fun. Be well Kethry Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
'Your pain is for you alone As it was, As it is, As it will be forever' -The Prophet Q'spel There is no life without pain. Revel in it. Accept it. Move on to pleasure. Good work here, I liked this very much. Sing while you may |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
thank you all very much for your compliments...they are very appreciated after tonights episode Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Well expressed indeed! regards, sudhir ..stood there screaming, fearing no one was listening to you ..the empty can rattles the most, the sound of your voice must soothe you~Metallica |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
A final word before you go away my love my life my yesterday Tommorrow is warm and filled with promise Leave me now or you'll regret it My heart may yearn for what you were but my mind it knows you for what you are Manipulate and tease my life away from me Im claiming it back so get away from me I'm aware of your tricks your subterfuge the lies you spread and the things you do Leave before i turn nasty to i'll make you bleed when i stab you through My heart is no toy, love is no game I spit on you know in the truths name Your time is now over My heart is not won Get ye gone from me know Your place is now gone If you catch my drift From walter Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling From glen to glen, and down the mountain side The summer's gone, and all the roses falling 'Tis |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
as well this one is very good. this was very enjoyable and i like it very much. please check your email. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thought provoking... I believe we so desperately hold on perhaps because we are afraid of new pain...a fresh heartache. And yet the very next one could be the right one for us...how long must we desperately hold onto hopes for the wrong one while each new day is an opportunity to find the right one...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Told you I would find you...this is so sad never say never |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Told you I would find you...this is so sad never say never |
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David D Junior Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 19 |
Another painful poem. You can almost feel the pain as you read. I guess for some reading it they CAN feel the pain. |
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