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Love Unspoken |
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tac Junior Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 28New Jersey |
Love Unspoken by Me I think of you lose sense of time love so good should be a crime When we are so close to know you're near to feel the butterflies Love, passion and fear To sip from your lips like a fine wine to taste the feeling to know that you're mine To touch you...to feel you... to hold you close to feel your heartbeat to feel us both Our two bodies joined as one together we melt..... no words, just love, unspoken, [This message has been edited by tac (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Really nice to have you back, tac! And a lovely poem too! Made me feel the butterflies. I hope this is representative of your current state!  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Beautiful poem! What a wonderful expression - to sip from your lips like a fine wine. |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
Great imagery here. I liked this very much. Linda |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Oh wow this was quite beautiful! Such expressions and love shown here. Great one! DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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tac Junior Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 28New Jersey |
Hi everyone... Nice to be back. This one's not about my current state though Just some new inspiration. I guess you can call it hope and desperation with a mix of my memories of her and the feelings I feel whenever I see her and think of what we had. It's what she made me feel like. I guess I wrote this to remind her of how things were. Maybe she still feels the same and will come back to me. Anyhow, I am leaving Thursday for a few weeks, to visit family. Hopefully things will be better when I get back, there is always hope. |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
*to feel your heartbeat* i loved that!! it mademe thiink of a love that i once had!! brings back the good memories!! nice work!! If you let love in your life you are either going to be happy or sad for the rest of your life. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I will hope things for you will be just as you wrote them here!! Nicely done, and an inspiraion to feel happiness! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Tac, I just want to add my agreement. It was said before. Lovely poem, expresses those feelings well. I hope its better when you get back too. Catalinamoon |
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Chere Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 18 |
mmmm . . . very nicely put* . . .how tender and sweet imagery can bring you to a place where sensations are found tracing the memory of a lover's embrace* Chere |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Oh tac this was just wonderful. The last verse sums it up beautifully -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Tac..I too hope all turns out well for you. Nice poem...nice thoughts. Hardrock |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Tac, I hope it's working out and that the poem can reflect your life. Kethry Kethry. as soon as you feel too old to do a thing. Do it! |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wonderful imagery here. very precious and tender way to remember what you had. i wish you luck. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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jerralynne Junior Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 11 |
i believe that very few times in life do we get the opportunity to meet someone ~ with a kiss melt into each other ~ wonderful yummy thank you for reminding me ~ jerralynne |
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