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A Simple Good-bye
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A Simple Good-bye |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Crying myself to sleep, alone in the dark. Putting together the pieces of my heart. Give me the will and strength to cope. Now that you have left I've lost all hope. Do the shadows rule the night? For with these shadows I do fight. I still need you by my side. Why didn't you stay and weather the ride? We parted with a simple good-bye. No reason given as to why. I'll harbor the hurt and shelter the pain. And in my dreams I'll see you again. |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Beautiful poem. Hang in there love Blue |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Wonderful poem, express that heartache well, Take care...hope things look up for you. The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Heartbreakingly lovely. Be well. Kethry Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Blue, Deborah and Lynne, thank you all for reading and commenting. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh E! Ouch. This is so well expressed, this pain. "Why didn't you stay and weather the ride?",...Exactly! ~Sending sunshine.~ Enjoyed,...Be well E. *Peace. |
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Karisma New Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 2 |
Wow, I could really relate to this poem. It's beautifully written. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wonderfully expressed... albeit sorrowful, Eloise... regards, sudhir |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
SpitFire, thank you. I guess when it's time to go, it's time to go. Karisma, thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sudhir, thanks so much.  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Another place I have been. Hurts a lot. Perfect expression of the sadness Catalinamoon Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art. Merrit Malloy |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Catalina, not a fun place to be, but time heals all wounds. Thank you for reading and commenting. |
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JohnDLeclare Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 43 |
very sad poem. Thank you for sharing it. John D |
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