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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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About a huge mistake I made in 1993  Love approached me today but I was too confused. I thought I should be careful. as usual-I lose. Love rapped my door today and I had to check it out. But fear of loss delayed me- what the hell was that about? Love reminded me today how it might have been if only I'd not been so dense and told him to come in. Love passed me by today, it's probably too late. I missed my chance at happiness by the cold cruel hand of fate... |
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Chere Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 18 |
Descriptively startling. Love finds its way in and around and under and between. It seems to be a mystery to find love coiled along a stormy path* Chere* |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this one very much Sandra! You've got my vote.  |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Yes, good job here Sandra, but as I believe... oh there is a reason for what you choose to do. Love the Poem!!!! I voted The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Sandra..I wonder how many times I have done this. I voted also. Loved it. Hardrock |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
I guess the only thing I could say about this poem is "s/he who hesitates id lost". Great poem Kethry Kethry. as soon as you feel too old to do a thing. Do it! |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hey, this poem is just great! Got my vote too |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
We can be so foolish can't we? Always better to take the risk and go for it, I say! Brilliant poem too! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
well written and stated... jwesley |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Very poignant Sandra, well written! Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well i would not be a friend if i did not vote for something so great that all of us go through some time i enjoyed this alot and hope that your ok now. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Yes,yes,yes, book! Cat,...this writing of yours has a beat to it, and words that make me go 'shoot'. Written with a power. Truly great work. Take care now. *Peace. |
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DeathTrippy Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45WY USA |
This is ever so true. The only hope I can provide is that maybe love will try again later. It's sad how love can be missed in a moment. You captured this very well. |
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