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A Lesson Learned
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A Lesson Learned |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
There is but one lesson that I've learned: Do your best the rest will burn Follow your heart do not let fate drive you apart from those who wait Hope for the best expect the worst this breakdown is not my first I never wanted any more than I had waiting at my door I simply wanted to live again to forget the things that happened then |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh my,...the last part just stings. Very affective writing. "I simply wanted to live again",...*sigh*. Wow. Be well C. *Peace. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Wow Chibi, a lot of truth in so few lines! Well done! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
ditto the above... jwesley |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Chibi..You amaze me sometimes...and this is one of those times. Excellent. Hardrock |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a great poem i really enjoyed it and i hope to see more. i feel we all learn lessons in life and some are harder than other and this is one of the hard ones. best of luck my friend. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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DeathTrippy Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45WY USA |
Thins brings to mind a few things I'd just as soon forget about. To live again.... would I do any better the second time? Good work |
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