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Do Not Cry
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Do Not Cry |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738
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Do not cry little one, I have not gone too far I am forever around you, Imagine me an island, like Zanzibar. I am your rock, your foundation I'll prop you up when you're down Close your eyes, little one, please smile, wipe off that frown. My angel, my love, it hurts me, Please do not grieve so I am only over that hill Can you see me, little one, that glow. Although you cannot touch me, In spirit I am here In that rainbow, that falling star, My angel, I am near. My precious, when you can't go on, The tears are streaming, you're screaming I will be drying your tears, Cupping your face, have you believing. When your soul is heavy, Your heart is breaking, do not cry Little one, it is just for a moment It isn't forever, it's not really good-bye. ~ Tara ~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Tara, this is very touching and sad. I could cry. I know it is meant to be comforting, but sob... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Tara,...so full of dedication and love. It's touching, and sad, and displays a huge heart. It speaks. I hear it. It's lovely. Be well T. *Peace. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Tara...yes, it is indeed touching. Very nicely done. Hardrock |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Tara, this is so tender, sad and so beautiful. I had to go back for a second read. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Tara, this is so lovely. Thanks for sharing it.Best wishes, Juls |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Tara ~ a lovely and touching poem. "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
I don't know what to say here... lovely, touching, very very sad... all I can think is everything everyone else has said. "And one day...the whole stinking world would be theirs..." -- Velvet Goldmine (Todd Haynes, Oscar Wilde and, unofficially, David Bowie) |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Ditto to what everyone else has said. Touching and deeply moving.Thanks for writing it. Kethry Kethry. as soon as you feel too old to do a thing. Do it! |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Tara, this is lovely, what more can I say? The others have already done all the saying for me! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Tara...very sweet and gentle. Nicely done. Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Gentle, touching, beautiful...well written... jwesley |
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