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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
This is named after the song that was playing- BLOODFLOWERS I feel so alone, Like I'm dying, Or just falling apart, I feel so close to you, But you seem so far away, "The time always comes to slip away" Watching myself die, Every day with out you, A day too long, I feel like I am dying, Dying all alone, "This world always stops" But I am right next to you, Listening to the same song, I think I am falling apart, Or just falling in love, I'm running out of time, "The sun always sets" Time with you, Everything has to end, Even if I don't want it to, I feel so alone with you, "This wonder always leaves" You feel so far way, I'm dying here with you, Imagaining being wiht out you, "The time always comes to say good-bye" |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Ouch, I have felt this way when I had been away from my significant other, Great job!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
really enjoyed the poem, and for sharing such a painful experience. I think the song might have been from "The Cure" their anew album is called "BloodFlowers" so it could have been the title track. "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Great poem.... So close yet so far away.....I know the feeling! Wonderful! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
The end of something we enjoy having with us is painful..but at the end there is another new beginning. I enjoyed the read, could feel your sadness, hope your doing ok!! Thanks for sharing!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Gin, expressed very well  A poignant poem... very heartfelt. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Gin...I really liked the structure of this poem. Almost as if it could be a song. Hardrock |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wonderful flow and rhythym here. exceptionally done!! i can almost hear the music too. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
Just plain awesome ~MiSeRyDivine~~ Wrath is glowing now through my sunken eyes.. Pain is growing I'm jaded form your lies I dont know why but its the best way to die You are the trig |
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