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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
Those girls scare me you know the ones who try to see what they've become they want to be as good as gold they are really goddesses (or so they're told) they live in the city their bodies are sold their lives are broken they are young, but feel old. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
short, sweet and thought provoking. Great job!!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
This poem is neat and kinda scary....cool concept! Great job!  -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Broken_Heart Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57Netherlands |
Quite interresting... Love the part of they want to be as good as gold they are really goddesses (or so they're told) Cause I know of girls who act that way... Beautiful... Sincerely Broken_Heart Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within... |
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JohnDLeclare Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 43 |
Makes me sad. I guess that should not be a surprise considering the title of the forum. John D |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Chibi...this is indeed a sad commentary of a segment of our society. I always enjoy seeing things through your eyes. Hardrock |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
good job!!! this is very powerful. very well done. thank you for sharing!! kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Cloned picture perfect girls such as these, are scary and in my opinion deserve pity. For they never could, never have and never will fight for their true selves, their individuality. They live now and pay later.. A sad existance.. Thought provoking - great work!! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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