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The Void Inside... |
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Broken_Heart Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57Netherlands |
Hey everyone... Today I post my latest poem, one I have written for my lost love, as she is struck very ill... - Hope you get well, Devilchild - The Void Within... Pain and anger I feel within As again you are the one hurt I see you wither away There is nothing I can do But to feel your void within Your illness is eating away From inside you cry Trying to fight your evil Yet you are alone now No one to beat it away I try to enter your void To make undone your sickness With my saddened tears Surrounded by your darkness I fight within your void... Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice, I hope you let her see this. Very caring tribute, well expressed. Catalinamoon |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
BH..Nice tribute to your friend. Poems help us span the void...reaching out with love and compassion. Hope your friend is better. Hardrock |
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tookabear Junior Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 28Mansfield, TX USA |
This brought tears to my eyes. It is so painful to watch someone we love hurt from a source we cannot stop. I wish the both of you the best of luck. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
a true friend you are. this is a wonderful, wonderful piece of work here. my prayers are with you and your friend, and everyone else that loves you both. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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