Dark Poetry #2 |
Rollercoaster |
meara Junior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 15 |
Living life on a rollercoaster never knowing who is going to stay or who is going to go just hoping for one perfect moment to come around the bend where everything becomes complete and makes sense |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
That is one truthful statement. I just wrote a similar titled poem, will wait awhile to post it. Nice work. Catalinamoon |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Meara, It is a good poem don't but yourself done so much. -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Definitely slice of life....thanks.. jwesley |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Neat...I liked this one quite a bit. -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Meara..very nicely said. And such truth. I enjoyed it. Hardrock |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
you said it kid. way to go. i am in the seat next to ya. hang on tight cuz here we go!!! LOL excellent work!!! kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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