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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
0 posted 2000-07-25 06:40 PM

Throught my life
I have seen so much death
To last me to etirnity
Everyone is dieing
So fast
And without care

That don't care about each other
Or themself
We don't matter to each other
Cause we all just wanna die

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)
© Copyright 2000 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
StarrGazer
Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
1 posted 2000-07-25 08:00 PM

hmmm very short poem but it has me thinking... we don't care or we care too much? why worry about dying it is inevitable and  worrying will do us no good ... so maybe perhaps we should worry about living?
Broken_Heart
Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57
Netherlands
2 posted 2000-07-26 02:34 AM

Short, sad, powerful, great... Nothing more said about it... Great job, hope to read more about your work! Sincerely Broken_Heart
Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
3 posted 2000-07-26 11:34 AM

Thank you glad you enjoyed it.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)
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