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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
A poem is like a tree. it takes and takes, needs and needs An when a branch breaks it bleeds And Loses part of it's honesty Calls for grief and sorrow, but all is Better tomorrow I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Jeremiah, this is a fantastic poem!  Yes, poetry is a bit like that isn't it?! Hmm.. although sometimes I don't know whether "all is better tomorrow"  Terrific work! |
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hunter Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 22lex,ky |
What you say about the breaking is true,but will it be better tomorrow?who knows.you must live for today for tomorrow may never come.goodwork |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
hm. Impressive writing. Do you often read proverbs? This is a lot like a proverb. |
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