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It Is My Heart
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It Is My Heart |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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It IS My Heart When the morning comes and with it my light many thoughts, my mind views. I am touched by words, that I see, sometimes hear bringing pleasure to me each day, new. Each part of me that is given or shared comes from deep inside my skin. Rhythmic music is coursing my veins originating from heart, that's within. So to say "it's not" or "it's only", those words can sting, can swell me, my hurt. And it's moments like those that I feel in distress knowing only these issues to skirt. Am I "only" to you? Is that all that I "am"? If that's so, tell me now, it's okay. I can live with those words, and will hurt for awhile, for tomorrow's another day. M [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
MMoonchild...I perceive the pain of confrontation, and resolution fueled by anger..and enough hurt for a lifetime. Nicely done. Hardrock |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I like how your words break upon each other, like waves on the shore. Good write!! Thanx! Click |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Hardrock..I was told it was only words and not my heart by someone...and of course we women take things to heart sometimes more often than men do..(*wink I said sometimes) ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Click..thank you that was a beautiful response ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
...those words can sting, can swell me, my hurt. I really liked that! So true, and amazing what words can hurt us the most. Christopher |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you again, Christopher.. yes words do mean a great deal although they are so easily misunderstood...a combination of actions and words...with good intentions are the most meaningful ~~softly Maureen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Again Maureen, I fully understand this poem. Its flow, the feeling of the easily broken heart, the wrong words that cause so much pain, even the unintentionally hurtful ones. You write with your heart and share your feellings with us, and they are very touching. Catalinamoon |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Having been married as long as I have and having been planted in the same location for too many years...I can only write from my heart and even from my lack of experiences although they are much harder to do and therefore become my wishes, dreams and fantasies thank you, catalinamoon ~~soft smies Maureen |
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